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Old March 23rd, 2008, 03:59 AM
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the old man

As I laid there a crude smell of air hit me like a sack of bricks. I sat up to catch my breath then I realized something I was bleeding. Then I blacked out. When I awoke something felt weird then I got up to get washed and clean the wounds but something felt strange I didn't know what to do I just wanted to eat. As I look in the mirror I saw that my skin was pale and then I knew what was wrong I wasn't breathing.

As I went dark with confusion I felt like I was falling then my eyes burst open as I heard my name being called. When I looked up it was dark I was sweaty and my mom was standing in my doorway asking if I was alright. Then I realized it was a dream just and only a dream. as I got up from my bed I told my mom of my dream she said it was because I was nervous of my swim meet later that day.
While I was getting dressed for school I saw some one standing under a tree across the street he was looking into the trees as if he could look down. just standing not doing anything I dint want to know most likely some old person seeing that I live in front of a retirement center for active seniors when I got into my parents mini van off away to school he was just standing there I thought it was weird but hey he's old and most likely confused on what is going on. But it was also weird that it had been an hour. Since I looked out my window for the first time that day.
Well school went fast but the swim meet was cancelled because some one thought it would have been funny to make the pool water red. So now as I walked home I stopped by the local gas station to get food it was closed me felt pissed everything was going bad no swimming and I was starving. While I walked home a lot of cars have wrecked into each other but no one was arguing about whose fault it was. Then I just got the feeling like I was alone then I just feel this vibration in my pants it’s my cell phone and it’s my friend Zach.
Me, hey dude what’s going on
Zack, some shit is going down dude get some food and a baseball bat and head down to my house on your bike ill explain everything when you get here.
Dude what you mean food what’s going on.
Zach, just get down here and if some one try’s stopping you just slam them...

What the hell is going on I get in my house grab some food to put in my gym bag cause my back pack has a bat and cans of soda in it.

I get on my bike when I start to move to the other side of town I realize no one is out it’s just me. Then I see the old guy just standing in the middle of the street and he starts to wobble over me just gaining speed as he gets close. I reach for my bat and I wait for him as I get off my bike he rushes me and I slam him in the ribs he falls over and spits up blood. I think its over but he grabs my leg I start to panic I swing again but he wont let go so then I just burst with adrenaline as I stomp he's head on the pavement the smell and looks of he's deformed skull and I start to puke but then leave my bike in the middle of the street and I just take off to Zach’s.

everything and nothing is going threw my mind while I’m running I see nothing but blackness until I see a crack of light I stop and everything unblurs its a car wreck and the passenger is screaming for dear life I stop to see a 7 year old trying to fight off what used to be he's baby brother when I open the door he runs out behind me as I get ready to try and fight off the demon. he charges me but yet he's two feet shorter then me so I just choke up the bat and swing away then I here a shader and a body just standing there I took off he's head in just one swing and broke the back window. Then I wondered as I took of again with the little kid wonder what was missing form the previous encounter there was no blood spewing form the little ones empty neck. We just one block away from Zach’s house we get there with no more encounters of the monsters. we get to the front door of the apartment building as I just start to push he's buzzer I hear a loud high pitch sound its a cat just standing behind us. Me and the little one who is devastated on the previous sight of seeing he's once little brother beheaded by a total stranger. I just start to feel sad and depressed as the cat started to scream out the darkness of its once clean soul I begin to puke and loose hearing when out of no were it pops. I look up to a blurry vision of Zach just relaxing like nothing happened he lowers the metal ladder. When I get up there he just has this look on why i'm carrying a seven year old and I told him what had happened. when I climb into the window of he's apartment I see the church channel on and the priest is ranting on about all the bad stuff we did to deserve this then he shows the outside of the church all the demons were standing outside the gate not daring to step one step onto holy land. Then I just black out problem for all the unwanted stress and fear of what is going on.
I wake up in the middle of the night I try to imagine that it was all just a dream but it wasn’t I look outside to see Zach in he's lawn chair looking. the little one who I still haven’t asked he's name is sleeping on the couch next to me I crawl out the window again to see glowing green dots all over I ask Zach what is going on.

James, dude what the hell has happened to our town where is your mom and did the little kid say any thing?
Zach, well hell is happing to our town my mom is still at Wal-Mart I talked to her before you came. And the little kids name is Shylo and he asked if he could put on cartoon network because he didn't want to here pastor Jones
James, what are those green dots why are there so many and why don’t we go to the church its safe?
Zach, well first we have to wait till morning. The green dots are eyes of the demons don’t stare at them or some shit will happen. And tomorrow we take my land lords car to go to Wal-Mart for my mom and supplies. Then he tosses me a soda and says wait with me.

When I wake I see I’m still outside and i’m cover in the morning dew I look off the side and see no bodies of demons or glowing green eyes. As soon as I crawl back into the apartment I smell food, IM STARVING when go to the kitchen I see bacon ham steak and eggs and shylo and sack are eating. I sit down something seems different in Zach he isn't talking just sitting there with a strange look on he's face he then brakes the silence with let's go.

He then throws me some pop tarts and says no time to eat we have to the car started we walk down to the platform of were the cat used to be but there are no chunks of the cat just a tag that says fluffy. We walk around the building complex to see the white ford crown Victoria and we open the doors and the keys are still in we start up and Zach says
You’re driving.
I start up the car and we pull out of the parkway and start of to Bridgewater the poorer part of beaver county as we go under the over passage we hit a person Zach’s said "keep moving don’t worry" I try to focus but something’s wrong after hitting that old man and beheading that old man there’s no blood. As soon as this comes to mine I tell Zach. "dude shut up and pay attention to the road" as soon as we get to the bridge to cross over to Monaca we realize we have to walk a crossed cause of the pile up of burnt down and crashed up cars we get over to Monaca with no sign of the hell monsters we get to the car lot to find a new ride cause if not its a five mile hike witch no one wanted to happen after we bust in we go to the repair room to find a lot of tools that are useful like a window cracker a tool to help brake windows in case of and accident some screw drivers and a high caliber pistol the car repo man used in case things got out of hand with a box of ammo as soon as we get the car we make our way threw to Wal-Mart when we get there we see that its on fire Zach runs up to the ruble and scrims for he's mom when he hears no answer he falls to he's knees and screams. right at that moment Zach pulls out he's 9 mm pistol and blows he's brains out I myself start to freak out I don’t know what to do my only livening friend is dead and shylo is running away from the sight of brains as soon as I collect myself I drive to shylo who is now crying of what just happened we start back to beaver we pull up in front of the church to see ash's all around the church we walk on to the green the grass and feel safe then the priest walks out and bless' us for coming we have been staying here for the last month shylo is now 8 and the season is winter we have given up all hope of being save its been dark for three hours the snow is glowing only show the black feet of the demon. The once holy grass has faded away with fall and now demons can walk up to the church then on day they opened the door but faded away in dust as soon as they stepped in.

GOD has left us even the priest stop wearing he's cross
When the day came when demons enter the church we new that time was drawing close we armed are selves in the day and at night we watch the Mr. Jones left one day and never came back the church was ruined down missing windows and pews holds the demons form coming in shylo was sick he needed help. The sun never shinned so the demos didn’t every leave when I could not take it anymore hearing the taunts of the anti Christ I carved cross's into two bullets one for me and shylo. Shylo was scared of pulling the trigger so I had to do it for him. I felt awful as I watched he's little body hit the ground so I got down onto my knees and prayed for forgiveness right as I finished I know what I had to do I look up to the morel of Jesus and pulled the trigger. when I opened my eyes I saw a golden gate and a old man with a book and there was shylo sitting be hind the gate waving to me the man walked up to me and said "James I am saint Peter hell is full so the dead shall walk the earth till you do something about it."

I woke up smelling of dry blood and my mom was standing in the door way asking what was wrong and I told her of my dream and then while I was getting dressed I saw the old man with the book under the tree.
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Old March 24th, 2008, 01:22 AM
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I like this story . Well done.
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Old March 24th, 2008, 04:34 AM
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Old March 27th, 2008, 08:43 AM
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Oh n0es!

Groundhog Day with zombies!! D:



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Old March 28th, 2008, 12:14 PM
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